So that last post was made with the help of all the people who are named in the story. Don’t worry I had permission to use all of them in the story.
It came about after reading a post put on a Facebook event page for a friend’s 21st earlier this year. It written is almost exactly how it was posted on Facebook, with a few of the spelling mistakes fixed, as well as the grammar and tense. I also had to remove one of the original posts as it didn’t fit with the rest of the story, and took you out of the text.
However I’m not sure how well this goes for a story format, as much as I like it, I don’t think there is much recognition in this field yet.
Anyhow your feedback as a reader is greatly appreciated and I had fun doing this.